Some parts could be reworded, but I loved this poem. It's bright and cheerful, but there's always a few lines that remind you death is a color too. The last lines were...amazing. You put the two themes of your poem together, and it made so much more sense. Brilliant.

-mouth drops open- You makeith my poetry pale in comparison! Such imagery! It was so... sad, and yet so happy! -tear- I loved it! I'll review more of your stuff when I get the chance... but this is so good!
~*~..::Ki-ki-chan::..~*~

holy shit. HOLY SHIT! this is BRILLIANT! i mean, this is ABSOLOUTLY AMAZINGLY FANTASTIC! holy SHIT! you have SUCH talent! you are SO gifted! keep up the AMAZING work! im in COMPLETE awe *stares with mouth hanging open*
~Birdy

like it...it rhymes well...some parts seemed angsty yet humorous...i dont know if thats what mood you were going for

Nice. I was a little iffy about designating each color of the rainbow to its own stanza, and a couple scattered lines that could've been reworded, but I especially liked the first and last stanzas.

Wow. That makes me so sad. It does. I'm about to cry. It was beautiful written although the ending was kind of weak. It didn't have the same rhyme scheme as the other stanzas...but beautiful. Depressing. But Beautiful. Good job!
-Deirdre Blair

That was a very beautiful poem. I loved how, when giving images for each of the colours, they were just simple little everyday things. They were contrasted nicely in the last line when you gave an image that fit death. All the colours and images conveyed very well the message at the end of the poem. A very original and well-written piece. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

I love this poem, it's so cute, and fun, and I know that sounds fluffy, but really, it's good.