|Reviews for Coffee with Spice|
| DeleteMyAccount chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
Wow, this is pretty! I love the imagery, lips covered in mocha latte, sounds nice.
"legs kissin my swaying red dress" and "kissin my lips of cappuccino caressed,"
Both really nice lines!
Thanks for the review you submitted to one of my poems. It made me smile loads, since no one ever reviews my work. (lol yep, pathetic I know.)I'm about to submit another poem or two, would be great if you reviewed one. :)
*rushes off to check out more of your poetry*
| Cecil Wazowski chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Whoah! You are phenomenal. All I have to say is this:
"Children should be seen and not heard. I'm an adult, so it follows that I should be heard and not seen."
| Kawaii Lara-Chan chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
kissed my lips of cappucino caressed...
the spoken words of a genius... that is my favorite line! and i love how your voice shines through in this, the employment of the 'lovin' and the 'kissin' and the use of those colloquialisms really really work here and fit your purpose quite well.
splendifurous as always!