Reviews for The Creator's Midwife
Emmanuel K. Quartey chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
This was a beautiful experiene. the experience was to see the piece elve from passable to great."

And the fat man lumbered out of bed, put on his magician's robe, drank his potion, wielded his wand until, abracadabra, the song inside bubbled and boiled and the very wind and waves found their way onto canvas, and when the fury of the storm passed, there upon the canvas was revealed, the sacred act of creation that had made this offspring so splendid. It's eyes spoke eloquently, "Thank you, father."

And from the heavens above, a voice called out,"Jeez! It took you long enough!"


This last bit is, just, beautiful. And apt. I'm going to look for more of your work.
the satisfactor chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
i would think this fits into the realms of humor, not fantasy. interesting use of your creativity. chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow, very nice. Very deep, keep it coming.
princesscat chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
wow! for a writers block story, this was good! i'm going to see if you've got any other stuff...
Kikikyo chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Whoa. that was really deep. Keep writing
Walk Backwards chapter 1 . 4/15/2004
*stunned silence* Thats utterely... wow. I don't know, but it made me shiver.
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LordK chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
That was good! I liked the beginning, and the symbolism. Some of it was a little gross, and the ending was kind of confusing, but everything was very well written and good.