Reviews for The Visitor
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
Lol, Genesis, "sonic device" is crying. Once again, this is brilliant.. your insight is amazing.
Genesis of Demise chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
So far, I can't really feal the fantasy in this story, unless the fact that the baby is real freaking smart, and was given an assignment, and a machine was installed in him to decipher sonic waves. I have no clue what the hell is going on, but that's a good thing, beacause it makes me want to read more of your story if you ever post some more. Your writing is mysterious, your imagination is creative. You flow very well. Keep it up, so i can find out what in the lord's name is going on.
Good job with the writing and the plot, you've got something going here.
And whenever you find the time, return the favor and read at least a chapter of my story, "Pinnacelf: The Final Orb of Life." just copy and paste the following link into your address bar and go to it or just look for it on fiction press under rating R and fantasy. [ . ?storyid1664574&chapter2]
Thanks