Reviews for A Youth Group Story
Ashley U chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
I like it. Zach reminds me of someone I know. (I wonder who?)lol. Well, you better keep writting so I can stay busy in Sociology class!
Emo chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
I enjoyed very much the beginning of this story, and I think that it is vital, crucial, and imperative that chapter two soon follows. I want to see where this story goes and how the characters develops. I especially like Ariana. She reminds me of someone, I just can't put my finger on it...?
Ashley chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
You need an accident prone kid! otherwise it's good.
CaffineAnonymous chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
aside from some minor typos, it's a good start. update soon please
Anson chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I thought it was a very interesting story and funny in most parts of it.
i'm would like to see and read some more chapters.
Jen chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Yea! I approve! This story better be amusing and not all mushy... I want a good laugh... because right now I say "MEN!"... but other than that... yea! well written, makes me want to get to know the characters better.
Getuie chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
*grins* I was smiling so broadly, my face actually hurt... Very good, you two! Update soon please!
lostinscotland chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
i like snowball fights. _
anyway, good start. a few grammar concerns, which i'll point out later if you really want, but overall i like it. write more!
talkingbanana chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
ah first sentence - get that present tense out of there! :p
sorry, i'm not going to be a strict obnoxious grammar cop while reviewing, but tense-switching is one of my pet peeves.
great start, guys! i expect to see more soon! :D