Reviews for My Faded Eyes
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
the second stanza is my favorite.. great poem
Nickolaus Pacione chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
This is a well written poem here. I found your page when I was reading AAron's work, I am glad you liked his work. He has a few more up on his diary-x journal. I as well have new material as well - it might not be posted as often on here but the journal at diary-x is a good place to look. I have a new fan fic but it is more original than anything - titled "Sherlock Holmes & The Case of the Great Old Ones."
Aleonic Relic chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
lost to life, sounds like the story of my life. the flow is ok and the poem is good.
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
"The cold blue plastic heap,
called my college seat.
Cradles infertile hopes and all of my aspirations.
(It’s such a pain in the ass, really.)"
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I really like those four lines for some reason.
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Keep writing.
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Namir Swiftpaw