Reviews for A Dried Line of Tears
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
interesint idea i like it a lot
Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I really like this! it was really kool and catchy. in case you didnt realize but your line about crying a line of tears and stuff, could also be a metaphor for drugs(cocaine), which gives the poem a wonderful effect.
Wicked, and thanks for reviewing my letter to god hehe
shauna