Very interesting. Very. It's got good metre, but it can't really decide whether it's verse-libre or not. Great idea, though.

Nice! I really think that this poem might work even better if it rhymed the whole way through - just a suggestion.
Other than that, you SHOULD be proud! (ALthough, i must admit, i'm slightly, ok, biased, towards poems that rhyme. Morally, i'm against poems that don't rhyme, but as far as non rhyming poems go, this one's pretty good!)

Wow. So good. So true. ::shakes head:: It's a sad state today's punk scene is in, my friend.

hm... i like it, but maybe you mean 'underhanded' instead of second hand? or i missed something? im not sure quite how punks or punx fit into it but in the general, i like it.
cheers
-tresparadise