Reviews for Patricks and Westerns |
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![]() ![]() Are you mental! Who ends a good story like that? They were supposed to end up together! Ug... You ruined your own story do you realize that? That is really the absoult worst thing you could have done! |
![]() ![]() I liked your story up until the last fight. I mean, is greg bipolar or something?One minute he loves her and the next he's telling her that shes white trash? |
![]() ![]() ![]() gr8 story. ur a gr8 writer. i just hate the ending i think it wouldve been nicer if they ended up together. well good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gosh. i will honestly hate you forever & ever if you dont write a sequel. i cried at chapter 24 . i spent my whole entire saturday reading your story so please tell me you will write a sequel. ok? :D thanks for writing such an awesome story. i made my day. |
![]() ![]() Please write a sequel. This story is so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i certainly was not expecting that twist! sophie's pregnant? but it's a good technique to tie in the past with the present. but wow, she's only fifteen! that jerk brian or whatever his name is better not desert her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! i'm so glad greg changed for the better! i love the idea that guys can think we look great even when we don't. and i'm glad greg didn't do anything serious at the party because that would have been bad. anyway, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, i love greg's parents! but that's so sad about isabelle's mom. again, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a jerk! i can't believe him! and i thought girls were mainly stupid when it came to love. but he is amusing to read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg, i so take back what i said about liking greg! i knew it! how horrible he is! but maybe he'll end up falling in love, like tommy did? (i hope) i admit it gets a little confusing and it's like, woa, when you first start reading the point of view of greg. i think it would be easier on the reader if maybe sometime you tried doing it in third person because then it's easier to switch from each person's thoughts. at least, i think it is, but it could just be me! great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love greg! i just hope he doesn't turn bad or evil or something by surprise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i definitely did not expect isabelle to be honest with greg in telling him where she lived. stories usually end up where the poor girl conceals the truth she's poor for a long time, and then the guy finds out and feels betrayed, etc. i love how you definitely took your own road. excellent job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story! it really is amazing how divided even one town can be. i think you portray the narrator's feelings and fears very well. great job! |
![]() ![]() Omg! I was crying when i red the last chapter. I was so sad. But I'm glad you ended it like that. Its better. Well...hmm...wat 2 say? r u going to rite mor? idk...write more. c ya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say this is one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. I'm only disappointed that Greg didn't follow her, but that is life, right? Life isn't meant to be a fairy tale, I suppose. I have to admit, I was reluctant to finish reading about halfway through the story! I'm not a big fan of angst and drama, but I'm happy that I read this! Excellent job! |