Reviews for Patricks and Westerns
kitty chapter 25 . 5/10/2004
I don't know what to say...loved your story from beginning to end...but the epilogue was depressing.
I think that there should be a sequel of some sort when Isabelle has established herself in France. And one day, a gorgeous, green eyed guy by the name of Gregory turns up on her doorstep!
I really don't have any idea, I guess I'm just a person who loves happy endings no matter how cliche! Smile!
lil ms bj chapter 17 . 5/10/2004
Hi, I'm so close to the end! I don't know if it's a good thing or a bad thing though, lol. This is a superbly written story, I wish that it wouldn't end. But I suppose that might be a little hard on you! :)!
romance addict chapter 5 . 5/10/2004
omg, this story is the BEST! and it deserves a thousand reviews! i love it!
Denise Fornae chapter 25 . 5/9/2004
Omg! That was a REALLY good story, I absoulely loved it. But why was Greg such a jerk? They had a bit TOO much communication at times and not enough communication at others. I didn't really like the ending :( It was too sad, he should have flown to Paris and won her back :P Please write a sequal! That would be so wonderful!
Jazzy Kitty chapter 25 . 5/9/2004
hmm... I really like how this ended, but personally I think you should have just left it at chapter 24. I think the epilouge was a bit unnessecary, but that's just me. Good job - I'm really impressed that you stuck it out with your first piece of writing. Not everyone can do that... (I speak from experience... none of my long stories has been completed yet. haha) Congrats to you; this was a good story. I liked it. One suggestion though - your style is very nice, but sometimes you switch back and forth from past to present tense within a sentence. Just watch out for that a bit. I read your bio and I know your first language is Spanish, so this grammar thing is understandable. Your writing is fantastic, and I hope you continue to write more! Once again, I commend you on a job well done!
~*Kitty Harlande*~
BeBeisjustmyNaMe chapter 25 . 5/8/2004
one word...SEQUEL
Without You chapter 25 . 5/8/2004
no, no, no, no! Coming from somebody who writes her endings like that too, no! They were supposed to be together. Come on, he has to follow her to Paris. It was very good however...and I agree, it is better than some of the others on this site. BUt good or not, they should have been together, even five years later after college or something.
pixistixrgood4u chapter 25 . 5/8/2004
And another thing, I take it you're not a Friends fan. At least Rachel stayed! I mean, did you have some grudge against her staying (I do realize that you had this planned LONG before the series finale...and I'm not even sure if you watch(ed) the show, but just play along, okay? okay)? *sigh* Don't get me wrong, I thought this was stupendous, I'm a sucker for tragedies (though I prefer happy endings, but crying is good...and you made me cry!), but Greg and Isabelle seemed like the perfect couple! Do you know what you should do? (haha, you can guess, right? about every other person has suggested it, but I'm going in a different direction) You should write a sequel...and I'm not necessarily saying that they should end up together, but they should reunite, though what I would have really liked to hear more about was Sissy's dad. Although he was a bit of a jerk, I think he could've made a great dad had he stayed. And besides, the grandpa has to be there to see his grandbaby. But you know, just a suggestion. I won't, like, hunt you down if you don't do it... Oh, and one more thing before I leave. For someone who doesn't want to be a writer, you're a LOT better at it than some of the people who actually WANT to be a writer. Honestly, I've read some pretty bad things on this site from people who want to make it big, and well, let's just say I can't see that happening (unless they get an editor...though I think I need one...and I'm not saying that I'm going to make it big or anything, and I'm definitely not saying that I'm a great writer), but you do have talent. So, cheers! Anyway, *sigh* I'll be looking for something else by you so write SOMETHING soon, okay? Later.
Lady of romance world88 chapter 25 . 5/8/2004
Oh my god, Greg ask Isabelle to marry him? I'm so happy. What about her sister? Will her sister kept a child? Will Greg will be in Paris with Isabelle? Why this story finished? You should update more, oh well. It's up to your decision when if it's finished the story. Good luck for next story. I'm waiting for your next new story. Let me know
Adders721 chapter 25 . 5/7/2004
I agree with everyone. That ending was so sad. I think it would be really cool if you wrote a sequal. Please consider it. It would be neat to have them reunite years later. Please think about it!
lucy chapter 25 . 5/7/2004
I am honestly crying right now after reading the ENTIRE thing all at once. (I've been sitting here for about 3 and a half hours reading this!) WOW. I have never read something this good in such a long time and I applaud you 100%! I am a sucker for happy endings but I'm pretty content with the ending, but a sequel would make me absolutely ECSTATIC. well, GREAT job and write more in the future!
cutepixieeyes chapter 25 . 5/7/2004
OMG I loved your story! I feel like crying, the ending was so sad. It was good, but very bittersweet. I can and will say it again, I Loved your story!Hey, do you think you caould write a sequel to this? Please, I beg you, I think that you should reunite them when Greg is on a buisness trip in Paris, and sees Isabelle. Ok donj't mind me, just endless musings here. But it would be a good story, him seeing glimpses of her, not knowing if it really is her or not, and vice versa of course. Ok sorry! couldn't stop myself, but it would make a great sequel! great job on this one! Way to go!
Speirmint chapter 25 . 5/7/2004
*coughbadendingcough*...make a reunition years later. come on.
jester on the sideline chapter 25 . 5/7/2004 has...obviously left me
cathy chapter 25 . 5/7/2004
this was SUCH a great story...but the ending sucked...even though i loved the story..thats only cuz i like happy endings...please write a sequel!
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