This was really great! I loved it! I thought the ending was kinda sad but not all stories r like fairy tells. U r a vry talented author and u should KEEP WRITING STORIES. Good luck! :)

aww, it's over :-( that was so incredibly sad. I seriously thought they would make an awesome couple. It was a really great story thought, except for the ending, dont get me wrong it was wonderful, but i guess i'm just a sucker for happy endings. But it's much more realistic this way. i hope you start a new story soon.
~BleedingOnyx

Sequel! The story can't end like this! It just... It can't. This is a romance not a trajedy. Must write a sequel.

I liked the ending, but I couldn't get over the fact that he was a huge jerk, even if he had good intentions.. in the end. I'm glad she got on the plane, and glad that they didn't end up together, even though they loved each other. Oh well. Good job. :)

:'( This was depressing. You made me finally fall in love with him and then they don't even end up together? *sigh* What was even the point? I hope you're happy with yourself. It's even sadder because now it's over...for good. I loved the story, everything about it...exceptn maybe the end, but since it was supposed to be like that then there's not a whole lot people can do about it. :'(

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!
get the picture? no?
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!

when people go for realism rather than the happy ending, they get killed. especially when the story was pretty popular. i know personally. and you're probably gonna get a couple of reviews from people who AREN'T joking telling you you ruined your entire story and that it was completely awful and all that. i applaud you for bringing life into this and for sticking to it. hold to your guns, and don't back down and don't listen to those people. this story was beautiful, and the ending was just tangible, and that made it ever more beautiful. i really enjoyed reading it, and i don't think a happy ending would have worked. props to you! and also that last line was so bittersweet. awesome job on your wrap-up and congrats on finishing.
~k8

okay u no what, i like this story but the ending was crap, get them together, not apart, good story but ending sucked, u have a happy ending, not a dumb ending, get them together and continue the story.

wow, that was, depressing. I prefer the happy endings, as apposed to the real life ones but hey. w/e. eh, I have cried too much tonight. heh. ah well, I needed to. I hold things in too long. good job. still not the way I wanted it to go but hey, lovers can't be winners. Just broken.
~Mel

awe that's so sad but it's still a good ending! I really really liked this story and your a fantasic writer!

Wow, nice story. Um..the ending is sort of depressing but realistic. Thanks for the story. I really enjoyed it although it would've been great if they were together. okay. Great job.
-Anne

*sighs* I don't want it to end this way, but you are the writer. LoL Epilogue maybe? :o) OK anyways, good job! I loved this story and I'm sad its over with!

Depressing, but realistic ending. A sequel perhaps, will follow? Heh heh. Actually, I like the story where it is. Lost love, and teenage hurt and pain and stuff. Perfect. Realistic. Yay for realism!

i dont like this story anymore! it's so unfair! *bawls like there is no tomoro* anyway ya my sister skibbles said it does say melanie, check chapter 11 and chapter 3, it says mallory and melanie, unless they are 2 different people

can't say i like the ending... but i guess your points of why are legit. keep writing!