i'm hoping he got like, possessed by demons or something... what the hell did he do that for? can you say ass? he better fix things. but she shouldn't forgive him easily... she's got to be strong... and don't give in to him. update soon!

mwa ha ha! keep up this story. i am hooked now, with the whole 'im pregnant' thing. e i So excited! yay. im anxious to know what happens with greg and Katy and sophie etc. continue mucho!
arivadache!

I like this story, it's really good. And i think that song that you put in your profile the "sugar pie honeybunch" is by the temptations, any way vey good story, i was never expecting that. Update soon please!
~BleedingOnyx

Oh my gosh! That was unexpected. That's awful! I can't believe she would do that. I'm sorry but I just do not have any respect for people who do not wait for marriage to have sex, especially the ones who get pregnant! That's crazy! What was she thinking? Anyways, "In and out my life, you come and you go. Leavin just your picture behind and I've kissed it a thousand times. When you snap your fingers or wink your eye I come a runnin to you. I'm tied to your apron strings and there's nothin that I can you. Sugar pie honey bunch. Do anything you askme to. I try to tear away from the screen And there's nothing that I can do. When you call my name girl it starts a flame burining in my heart tearing it apart. No matter how I try my love I cannot hide cause Sugar Pie Honey Bunch I'm weaker than a man should be. I can't help myself I'm a fool in love you see. Wanna tell you that I love you. Tell you that we're through. I'm not a child. But every time I see your face I get all choked up inside." That would be the Four Tops. In high school our drama group sold singing valentines and that was one of the songs we did my senior year.

Okay, I have to make this quick, because I'm grounded. I love the past two chapters. Just had to tell ya. Write soon. You know I love drama.

Whoa... did not see that coming.
But I'm happy for Sissy and Greg, they seem so cute and perfect together. I hope you continue!

hey!
i rekon you've got a great story! kool storyline n everything. oh yeh... r u going to do somethink about greg and his uphimselfness? a lil irritating that arrogantness. ra
hmm, u wrote in ur profile to giv u a shout for french. n i rekon uve got heaps great french, i thought itwas ur first language! just one teny thing... chap 10... name: porquoi es tu triste? (by the way i found this real sweet) it might jus b a typo, but i think 'why' is spelt, pourquoi?
neways, nuff of that.
! I hav an idea! i think u sed ur gna use greg's pov for the last chappy... i was thinking, why dont u do a third person pov, i mean, i wuld b different : if ya dont like it then nm me.
last thing... can u teach me spanish? i rekon its a heaps beautiful language : LOL, a lil hard ova da net. hehehe
gta run!
keep up the gr8 work, hope u upd8 soon
cheers,
sita xoxo

Oh Dear! Shes PREGNANT! Ahh! the Suspense! I'm glad the story took a wild turn because (sorry to say this) but it was kinda getting boring...Now its EXCITING again! yay!

CUte story~ it really is all too sweet~! and well written too. not a lot of spelling or grammatical mistakes, though in the first couple of chapters you used "i" a lot, especially when you should have used "me" like ...um..specific examples are later: but a good rule of thumb is to phrase the sentence into a question. ie. Who went there? (subject so) John and I went there. You gave it to whom? (indirect object so) You gave it to John and me.
yeah...hm...i think that's not the best example, but...yeah...

there's a cliffie! great...more belle/greg action plz! i luv how belle is so forgiving, i just love her character! hehe continue

ouch, that's gotta suck. can't wait to read more, and I honestly don't see anything wrong with her dating an eighteen year old. Making out with him in public is a little, eih. yes and having sex with him, okay that too. but just dating him is fine. :) okay, i didn't do my argument justice so i'll shut up.
~Mel

Dang! lol Drama, drama! I love it, update!

WOW! TRAMITIZING! Does Brian know? Haha! I LOVE it so far. Keep updating. I would actually like more Greg and Belle drama, but take it slow. Just a suggestion. It's your story. Keep it going! )

Awe man! Poor girl I kinda figured she either had a STD or was prego by the way she was...poor thing:( Well, great chapter PLEASE update soon because I wanna see the reaction. Geez my mom would be mad then sad and then she'd wonder what she did wrong or something like that. Then she'd be really really mad. so yeah lol. well anyways this is long enough now. And again UPDATE SOON!

Wow, that was an awesome chapter! I can't believe Sophie got pregnant! I guess that's what you were hinting at when Sophie asked Sissy about Greg (or something like that). Keep going! It's great