this is good!
besides I'm French and from Paris!
:)

I luv ur story, plz continue...

hey thx for updating. It's really good and like SO cute!

*sighs* I want a boy who will pay $200 for a dress for me... LoL These are the stories that make me sad about not having a boyfriend, but that's ok because I love it. Good job and update soon, ok? :o)

I really hope this story ends with Greg and Belle together. It seems like Katy is overdue for destruction. Greg seems like a nice guy, but somehow he's got to realize that Belle is the one for we could see the depths of their 'real' relationship, not this b/s they have going on now.

aww, how sweet. I never thought it was rushed, have you read any of my stories? I'm not for the whole "hard to get' thing, never have been. If I like someone, I'm the first to put myself out there, in my own time of course. Now I'm determined to get the guy I love, I will, i hope. oh well, write more soon!
~Mel

..playing the role of a good boyfried. has greg really changed his ways so fast? ahh..well it seems so, so far. i know how it feels to go shopping and pick out the perfect dress, only u cant buy it cuz its like a thousand times the amount u can afford. but that was sweet of greg. :D please update soon!
ps...its not Do me...its DOME...ack..stupid me and my spontaniety (sp?..w/e) lol. i hope no one else thinks that. *blush blush blush blush*

ahh! OMG..its not Do mE..lmao...its Dome..as in one word. i dont know..it was really a spontaneous one actually. it kinda just popped in my head. ack! do me..shit id never even thought of that. lol. this is one of the best chapter i've read that u've written. sry i havent been reviewing as much. :( please udpate soON!

Omg - he's so sweet now! I was really thinking he's a dirty *, but I guess he's changed? Hopefully.
I really like Belle- she's cool.

I hate you right now, really I do (despite the fact that I love this story and am happy that you posted more). But I think that you are trying to make me like Greg. :'( *mumbles to self* Don't let her win...*says more loudly*...it won't work. :'( At first, in this chapter, he was still a bit of a jerk, but then towards the end he got sweet. NO! This isn't how it's supposed to work. *crumbles to floor, crying hysterically in defeat* I still don't think he deserves Sissy though, but whatever. She makes a him better guy (not a man), right? Hahaha. So corny, but so true. _ Post more soon.

This is so incredibly good! Please continue soon! REal soon!

ok i absolutely loved your story! until this chapter...it just seems way too rushed! but hey eerything else has been great just something to work on

THIS STORY IS GREAT1 I XAN'Y WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART TO BE UP! YOU GOT FAN RIGHT HERE. SO COME ON GIRL AND TYPE YOUR FINGERS OFF. I REAALY HAVE BEEN ENJOYING READING THIS. Hopefully it'll be up soon and i want to see how it turns out. The only comment that I have is that I think that their love developed a littke fast. Also I feel like you are rushing things. Maybe you should develop more on them meeting each other. Well.. that's my thoughts for now. I'll be waiting for the next part to come up! And I didn't notice any gramatical stuff...once i read i read...i become a part of the world that the author's have created and i have to say that you have developed this very well... Well that's all for now. Post soon okay?

He loves her, he loves her, he loves her! I knew it! I knew it. I knew it! Haha. Sucker. DIE!
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Just kidding. Sigh. Greg. What a...guy. Thank god Belle isn't, you know, "Oh god, Greg, I love you too!" That would be nauseating...at this point in the story.
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School reading sucks! I hate being forced to read something. Anything. Grapes of Wrath right now...oh, i love that book.
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Update!

hey! I'm a lil newbie at fictionpress and I got your story from my friend's fav list. Your story was my first read on this site, and I do LOVE it, but I am considering my obsession with . Of course, if every story has that spark like all the others, I think I'd be well addicted, is that a good thing? I'm from Canada, so I know french. It's cool that you have some easy French to read, and that I don't have to read the English translation. All in all amzing, and plz continue! And its cool that you CHOSE to take french, where as, it's no option for me..
'Revoir,