Reviews for Patricks and Westerns
Daisies in Twilight chapter 18 . 8/23/2008
coucou! c'est moi, encore...

je crois que c'est "faire DES achats," pas "les achats"
Daisies in Twilight chapter 10 . 8/23/2008
Bonjour!

I'm happy to read a story with French thrown in :]

Alors... I believe "why" en fran├žais is spelled "pourquoi"

no biggie, especially since Spanish doesn't have the "u" in the "por" part.

Anyways, I like your story so far :]
Change in the Weather chapter 25 . 8/11/2008
400th reviewer! wow the ending was sad, almost like you were just in a hurry to finish it.

an amazing story though! i just wish they ended up together ]
Fayre Meira chapter 26 . 7/6/2008
omg see this is why writers on FP needs to be able to write clear summaries. i totally hated the ending and was glad to see the reviews page that im not the only one. i mean come one, you dangle the cookie in front of us and leave us with this forlorn ending? why bother categorizing it romance in the first place - tragedy is more like it.

but i still give credit for your writing,,the skill is there - shame the plot didnt work out well
secondbaby15 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
omg omg omg i loved this story wonderful job
christinaxxyo chapter 3 . 4/16/2008
The story is going good but you're moving really fast. This is only the third chapter and she's already saying she's in love wit him. It's very unreal although the idea is good.
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
This was a cute chapter but it seemed a bit odd to me for some reason. There were a few mistakes, grammar-wise, but it was good besides that. :)
helplessly in love chapter 26 . 1/3/2008
i hate the ending

wben though it was great

and sad and it made me cry

i just so sad. he shoudl of

came after her if he really

loved her. sad (
helplessly in love chapter 19 . 1/1/2008
aww i love this story

andi love the guy point of views

it make things so clear when u know

what the other person is thinking

) keepup the good work) even though u

finish this story already.
emotionless-stares chapter 25 . 12/2/2007
ah! come on! meet again! [[
emotionless-stares chapter 24 . 12/2/2007
[ i hope they meet again
emotionless-stares chapter 23 . 12/2/2007
/ it would suck if things ended like that
emotionless-stares chapter 22 . 12/2/2007
(gasp) omg 0 theyre moving?
emotionless-stares chapter 21 . 12/2/2007
wow intense there
emotionless-stares chapter 20 . 12/2/2007
what the hell? shes pregnant?
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