Reviews for Patricks and Westerns
pentara chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
i love it - update soon pls!
anatidaephobiac chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
Okay, okay, let me tell you... i think that this chapter finally gave me some faith in greg. before, he was portrayed as shallow and a spoiled rich kid who always got what he wanted, but i'll admit, this chapter, in his point of view changed my mind... i can tell now that he just wanted to love and be loved (although he sure was in denial about it at first...)
so good job, you restored my faith in greg. i thank you.
update soon!
Endowment's Seraph chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
nah, I'm not the kind of person to hold back, but I don't believe in flames. constructive critisisum is all I give bacause it's all I want back. This was so sweet, I'm a sucker for love stories, even though all of mine are like, DRAMA to the not max. lol. I swear, each of my stories is like a different side of me. I am so multi- personality- y. (?) Maybe I should question my theripist on anti- psycotics. A friend recommended them for me, but I was all, "No, I like the voices in my head." she was all. "Yeah, I did too, but then they started making me do all this bad fucked up shit." and I thought about and was like, "they would never do that to me, right?" This isn't making any sence but I've been up now for near hah, almost 24 hours without sleep, so I tend to get dilusional. hehe. What is the point of this review? oh yeah, I love this story, you must write more soon, ooh, I gotta burn that cd, damn computer, my laundry! my hw. wow, I have a lot to do. DO i? my god I don't know anymore, I need sleep really really badly.
~Mel
PPiglette chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
OMg its getting so good. what are you talking about? I so want to right like you my stories are freaking boring [hides]. Aw Belle is so innocent and sweet. :) She is one of those girls who forgive easily. Aw..
myworks87 chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
Aw, you make me feel so special. At the very least we do both like love in stories! Heh heh. ANd I TOTALLY knew he was in love with her. Who like, wouldn't be? Hahah. And yes...the Jungle was not read to my pleasure, but it might've been because I was forced to read it and I had to pressure myself to in the end as I had to write an essay and such. I admit, some parts were good. SOME parts. Heh heh. So great chapter. I like how the ending of the chappie was a little egostistical. So typically Greg. Heh heh. Yes, yes. Who doesn't love him?
Vincenza chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
I SO HAPPY! He's a bit full of himself but he's a guy, what can ya do. But still I SO HAPPY! You know you should read my story. It's really good, and I would feel very honored if you would.
Mackenzie Louise chapter 17 . 4/12/2004
*sigh* You win. He was...a little less jerkish in this chapter (but that doesn't mean he's off the hook), though still a bit cocky, unfortunately. He needs to work on that. To answer his question about who doesn't love him, I don't. ...But then again, I knew he was a jerk. I suppose if I was in Sissy's shoes, I might feel the same, but that's besides the point. And I'm glad she corrected him when he called her Belle. That was funny. I'm a bit disappointed in Sissy though, considering she forgave him that easily. I mean, after what he did, (though I know he was telling the truth) she shouldn't be entirely sure that he meant what he said. Post more soon, though. This was a cute chapter, and I'll even go as far as to say that in the beginning of this chapter I felt a little (put extra emphasis on that word) bit sorry for Greg, though he did deserve it.
KristiexxNguyen chapter 16 . 4/10/2004
aw... poor sissy... cant wait to read wat happens next!
Guardian of the Sea chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
Ahh! The SUSPENCE! Please keep writing! Grr..evil GREG! DIE! Heh..getting a tad..overboard. Well please write more, it SERIOUSLY is good.
Someone Out There Cares chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
I have to tell you the truth, your story is beautiful. I hate guys like Greg. Why do some of the cute guys have to be jerks? Not that I care. Great story, wonder what happens next.
myworks87 chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
Oops buddy. Went too fast for her! Heh heh. Great chapter. I'm so pleased that she stood strong to her convictions. I'm also relieved to hear that Greg didn't have sex with Katy. For some reason I believe him. Probably because he sighed. It's strange that after Belle turned him down he totally dropped the whole act. He could've tried to apologize and work it for a later time (not that I'm saying he should. But for such a practiced seducer...heh heh) Anyways. I'm intrigued to see where things go next, update quickly alright?
Endowment's Seraph chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
This is a great story. I hope you do another few chapters in greg's POV. Write more soon!
~Mel
Lynne chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
OMG! This story is WONDERFUL! I love it, it's so good. It's too bad that you're busy and can't update till the end of the story. Some parts I could guess that it will happen so try to prevent that, though overal it was fantastic! Keep it up !
anatidaephobiac chapter 16 . 4/9/2004
Go Isabelle! Greg... no comment... very disappointed with him. Isabelle rocks for standing up for herself and not letting him go too far. Update soon!
heavenleigh5 chapter 4 . 4/9/2004
great chapter :D Greg seems ok... I can completely relate with the mom and baby pics thing :$ *blushes* the kiss was sweet.
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