Reviews for Patricks and Westerns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hmm good story!..update sooN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah good. do they susspect something? Nay! I think not! lol. write more soon! ~Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I luv your story. Write mor as soon as possible. I can't wait. Thanks bye. Ps8 if you can read my story and critique it please. I need some educated writers like you to give me tips, etc._. Bye.~Ashlee |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was cracking up the whole way through this chapter. And I have to say that I'm glad he's scared. And at least someone can suspect him! Sheesh, Sissy is SO oblivious it scares me to think about it. But this was a great chapter considering you were able to keep me laughing the whole way through. Post more soon. |
![]() ![]() hm...I think the friend detects something! look out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is fabulous. You are most definetly my favorite author! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed there is a lot of whispering. I really like your story but it seems they never talk in a regular voice. Awesome story otherwise. Update soon please |
![]() ![]() Hey! glad you updated, i am absolutely enjoying this fic so keep up the awesome work okay! and since you did read my fic i want to thank you, i'm glad you love it! thanks so much! looking forward to hearing from you, meanwhile update! lots of love! Kris |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... I'm suprised I even noticed it lol. I think the only reason I did is because of my best friend lol. Anyway... I still don't like Greg very much. He'd better do something to redeem himself soon! ~FrenzyFan78 |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! another great chapter! can't wait til u update! i'll try my best to review every chapter from now on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED VANCOUVER RAIN'S DESCRIPTION! Absolutely delightful. *smirks and rubs hands together menacingly* If you put that in a dream of his or something I just may have to hunt you down because I'm going to be very disspointed that it didn't really happen. :'( He deserves it. He doesn't deserve her and she needs to get a real man who's worthy of her presence. And you know, I even started to lighten up to him a little bit in the beginning but then those thoughts of his came back and I lost ALL trust in him! I'm never doing that again, I've learned my lesson a few times now and I'm not messing up again. Anyway, I hope he's suffering immensely because of Katy and Liam. But anyway, post more soon. |
![]() ![]() You did a good job. I like the story. I hope she found out and makes him suffer real bad before she forgives him. lol. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is really good. Okay, I can't wait until he falls for her, *sigh* as you can tell my moods on love change with my mood of the day, and today is light and fluffy! write more soon! ~Mel |
![]() ![]() Hahaha! He's feeling butterflies. I hope the swarm the heck outta him! He deserves it. It's strange, cause I like him, but I also despise him. But the part of me that likes him is what keeps me holding onto the change that will inevitably occur. Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! i read this b4 bit didnt get to review. luv the fic! u gotta continue! *adds to favorites* |