Reviews for Shade of my Heart
WhiteRequiem chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Very beautifully written. One of the best poems on love I have read so far.
-Grant19-
Lauren K chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
it's just an opinion...but for some reason I don't like this one as much as your kaleidescope (can't spell) one. I do like the line "Your face is my sun" but the idea is overused and somehow it feels like you're trying to hard...I have no idea why, that's just my gut feeling. you can ignore me because I don't know what I'm talking about.
~Kiara
THANKS SO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR REVIEWS! YOU ROCK MY WORLD
Neon Tetra chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
I like it. Most of the "love" poems that I've seen lately have had a dark, mournful tone, and this is a welcome change of pace. It's very pretty.
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Very nicely writen. I have no negative comments to give about anything so great job.