Reviews for Our Masterpiece
Neo-Jenn chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Could use a few more lines about the effect of the friend on your life? Love it... :)
david chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
an artistic poem I must say.
WhiteRequiem chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
This poem is excellent, and it's great to see someone writing a poem like this in dedication to a best friend. As you claim to be a beginning poet, I must say you have quite the potential, and talent required to become quite a successful writer.
On a separate note, I would like to thank you graciously for your more than generous reviews you have left on my works. Your comments have helped inspire me to continue my haiku collection, and I am very happy that you have enjoyed what I have written.
Don't ever give up writing, it truly is a wonderful gift.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
Thats cool I like it! Thanks for the review!
Neon Tetra chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
This is a good start, but perhaps you could expand more on your metaphor- what does the foreground of the painting look like?