Reviews for The Flames Within
Watercatcher7984 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I like it. It seems very mysterious and deep.
Nanners chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
I don't know who she is, but I like her. _
SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
I like that poem a lot, it's really descriptive and well put!
Alaebhan chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
Wow, that is really good. It's very touching, almost compelling. Good job!
Julie AKA Hugo priestess chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Tear, Tear. As always i am extremely touched by your writing skills. This is exactly one of the things i never thought YOU'd write. Amazing, simply amazing, i'm off to cry in my corner now, it has moved me that much.
Jess Cockbain chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
And the Pulitzer Prize goes to Lauren Smith...this was a touching addition to your writing collection the metaphors in it brought the words to life. I can see your going places, keep up the good work
PS you should consider sending this to my publisher shes fabo, and can get your work published
Christine MacDonald chapter 1 . 5/29/2004
Hey Lauren did u really write that poem, or did somebody help you with it, it's pretty good actually. See you later, and check out my brillant literary work, Daddy's Boy, by christine macdonald (or macd.) It's fabulous. see you in clases