Reviews for Emotive Rainbow
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
This is a gorgeously sensuous grouping of haikus. What a joy to read and sense. Your work inspired me to write a grouping of haikus (Colored Rainbow Lips—Renga which I posted as chapter 167 of Haikus, Tankas and Rengas). Again, absolutely wonderful work. m
Manuel Fajar chapter 6 . 12/22/2004
You've certainly struck a wonderful theme with a rainbow of lips—Cool mint to warm citrus; taste-touch-color all blended in a wonderful potpourri of senses. Very, very nicely crafted, conceived and executed. m

Lavender snow lips,

Exhaling soul's whitened mists,

¿Purple magic trysts?—m—
smile persephone chapter 6 . 12/22/2004
Refreshing. I love them all!
not sure yet chapter 4 . 3/27/2004
o, i could SMELL that one, that was so kool, and again, either i caught a theme or itd definitely hormones, but it once again has this erotic atmosphere too...but this time a light fresh one, very clean feeling more than anything else, awesome job
not sure yet chapter 3 . 3/27/2004
beautiful imagery, again very intense and pretty...and rapturous, hot, sultry..sounds very erotic like again, i dunno, i love that (or i could be pointlessly horny right now) but either way, excellent job
not sure yet chapter 2 . 3/27/2004
ahahaha, i LOVE it, very sexy and makes me want mornings and orange juice...and sex, yea, but lmao, awesome job
not sure yet chapter 1 . 3/27/2004
o, wow, AWESOME haiku, muchly intense
Lina Inverse chapter 4 . 2/16/2004
Beautiful!
Lina Inverse chapter 3 . 2/16/2004
Great imagery
Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
Great description!
teh tarik chapter 3 . 2/5/2004
*safron petals*
Geez, this is going great! Continue!
teh tarik chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Vermillion lust
Wow cool! You have to write more, such exquisite words.
glitterjewele chapter 2 . 1/30/2004
a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-ahh! ;) gorgeous i love both of these, they're so great! exactly what haikus are supposed to do, completely bring the colors (and other things!) to life. yay! :D
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-oh!
ADSpencer chapter 2 . 1/29/2004
Nice, colors are fun!