Wow. The weight of guilt upon one's soul is truly a crushing force. It was a...disturbing sotry, to say the least. A little description of what the woman looked like would've been nice, but the story was still very dramatic. It could've ended better, but seeing as how you're obsessed with death, blood, and scars, I didn't expect it too, even though all sin is washed away by the blood of Christ, and no crime is unforgivable... but that's just my belief. At any rate, very well written and dramatic.

That was quite a gripping story. I quite liked it. The only bit I would change is the part about crossing yourself. It's head chest left right. Trust me, I have to go to church every week. -_-
Good story!
Much love,
Megan the MoonLitDemon