i think the whole point of being a writer is so that people can relate to u and for them to have someone to relate but i think that the only person who really gets this story is you.

Interesting.

I didn't have time to read this all yesterday, so I put it in my aol favorites, and went back to it today, and I got to say, I'm a tough reviewer, and this has nothing I have a problem with.
I'm insterested to know why this girl did that arrow thing at the two buildings. Very mysterious.
I am hopeing you update soon! This was a excellent beginning. I'm into this story, now
*clicks on author alert*
-Destin