Reviews for Have You Ever Thought
XsilentXescapeX chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
I really liked the first verse. The second sort of was off to me...maybe it could have been a little longer, it seemed to end to soon. but otherwise i really liked this and the creepy tone to it

~silent
Kusje chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
I like this one. Creepy, a bit you know? But.. it makes sense. Heh, I love the idea of thinking "crazy" Great job.
A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
The summary caught my eye while skimming through your works... this poetry really makes me think... well done...
Taka and Keichirou chapter 1 . 4/12/2004
hm...not bad, not bad...excellent topic/subject...
the ending is fits...it's the three lines before it that seems a little off...have you ever thought of doing anything completely crazy?
see, the subject takes it matter of fact, so saying it's crazy isnt the right word...try this
have you ever thought,
yeah, it's a thought...
of doing something, anything
but there's an enormous difference
between thinking and doing.
how's that?
and yeah stalkers are a fright, but just don't put your real add and stuff...
T
Cyberskiver chapter 1 . 2/11/2004
Definitely strange, but it does make one think. The last stanza did not quite make sense. It seemed just a bit random. The poem seemed to be saying that maybe these things could happen to you, or where they supposed to be intentional, suicidal acts? If you took it the first way, that at any moment, anything could happen to you, the poem would be more sinister and have a bit more direction. It's only a suggestion. Maybe I read it wrong.
K a l e y a chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Wow...Really good! I love it! *hugz authour* you're the best! lol
unwritten chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
i know what you mean, pushing the limits just too see how far you can go. but your right, thinking and doing are completely different. i really like it.
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
I think about these things all the time. But, I'm paranoid! I like it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
Mime chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
Oh, the last line of this piece left you with an impact you feel like you need to hold onto...amazing job with this one. You're right, by the way.