|Reviews for Take Your Soma|
| AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
"google told me what soma is" LOL fucking google, read the book GIRL!
Ah man, Brave New World is my absolute favorite. I think a bit more could have been portrayed in this but it definitely reflects the book and our society now.
I quite liked this line:"Whose world dissolves only at social discord."
Well done my friend, I applaud you.
| RosElisabeth chapter 1 . 5/27/2004
google told me what soma is.
again, this is a great poem. you're a great poet.
| Story-Teller's Aide chapter 1 . 3/28/2004
i really liked that, especially the last line. it wraps it up really nicely, and, although on the outside it is just an instruction, the meaning and deepness of it overwhelmed me.
| B e Hickman chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
More good wordplay, i really liked how superficial/extavaganza/socialite sounded together. Also I liked how you started with questions rather than ended on them-its more room to work with them. Again, I think this could use space, consider breaking it up into stnazas. But your ending is pretty strong here, so I won't mess with that.