|Reviews for Castle|
| Elsinore chapter 2 . 2/5/2004
Most excellent! This is a good piece of work, despite what you might say, Weese. Keep it up, Son!
There are grammar mistakes, and I can help you with those later, but I like the general idea.
I love the voice of the narrator. It's very different from your own, and I'm very interested for you to continue. You've gotten more interest than I EVER have for any one of my stories. Get the point? CONTINUE!
| Melinda Chesson chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Aie! What's gonna happen next? MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
| Not so Average chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
This is so good! And I love Moulin Rouge hehe. Very impressive.
| BleedingClowns13 chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
Hey, this is good, I like it. Update soon so I can find out what happens heh.
| caligrl478 chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
o i wonder what happened to tiffany! plz update soon
| caligrl478 chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
i like this story so far. plz update soon.
| Melinda Chesson chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Coo, Weesin! :) Fun shtory! Differentish. More! More! More! :D Wanna see what else you've done!
You're the coolest thing since cheze! ;)
| Jez-Arinn chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
well, i don't mean to flame or anything. the story is good by any chance. the plot's going great.
you do have grammar mistakes here and there but that can easily be fixed. some sentences seemed to be confused and confusing.
i'd definitely like to read the forthcoming chapters if you're going to update.