Reviews for Kaleidoscope
Lauren K chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Cool. I love to leave helpful reviews, but it's difficult if there's just one short haiku. I like the line "Colored fantasy." this has nothing to do with the writing, but maybe include more than one haiku on a page? That way, the reader can get into the writing more before it...stops.
~Kiara
WhiteRequiem chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Excellent! Reminds me of my earlier years when I used to toy around with those things.
-Grant19-
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Very 60s, I like it!