|Reviews for The Adventure Pack!|
| Infinity Plus One chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Yes, you should try making a story out of this; I tried making a similar one, but failed. That's probably because I'm better at writing about homocidal suicidal psychotic possessed people with drugs, so good luck!
| creation puddle chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
i think it would make a great story!please do, I'll keep an eye out.I don't really know what to say about it as a poem, because it doesn't have the meaning tied in yet-but that is why it would make a great story, because it will be new to read!
| TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
yeah.. this sounds like it could make a really good story. i look forward to reading it. *TI*
| SeaVoi chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Thats pretty cool, I wish you would have stayed in one spot for a bit longer, but generaly I like it!
| scapegrace chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Um, what is an Adventure Pack? And how can you write a story about a bunch of verbs? You're right it's not a poem, it's drivel. (My opinion only.)