Reviews for Even the grass has friends
your ever favorite mandELLA chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
This is very...hushing. Hushing might not be a word, but it fits. It's one of those poems that earns a moment of silence after you finish reading.
I do not grasp the entire meaning, but i understand enough to be caught up in the emotion.
the last line is my favorite, along with line 5 about the fireflies (i'm not entirely sure why...)
Thank you for writing more!
MandELLA
absolute0 chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Nice. You've finally resurrected from your hiatus and you've come up with something refreshing. I like the way how you wrote the poem, being romantic and not mushy and I just like the idea of how the speaker becomes friend to the grass. Keep up!
sunkist deathmints chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I love it. It really articulates this one moment, and this one image, and you can really get the feel of the tone. Best part is, you didn't even describe anything. You know, I mean colors and everything. I hate when people get too much into details. But, my point is I really loved it.
I wrote something about fingertips... I like fingertips.