Reviews for Shadow
Edraith chapter 1 . 5/7/2004
Sadly, hauntingly beautiful. The idea of the shadow is great, isn't it really like that when you have lost a loved one, that somehow their presence seems to linger palely, fuelling your melancholy remembrance. The parallelisms, the juxtapositions of now - used to, the comparison shadow-heart in the end, the tone of finality and sadness all work extremely well. This poem is absolutely beautiful and well-done.
Reakeda chapter 1 . 4/25/2004
Hey, the poem was very touching. I loved it. If you could r/r my work some time it would be greatly appreciated.
SummerMindset chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Aww. -emo tear- Beautifully written. Very sad. PS - Where can I get one of these spiritual bandages?
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
Sad... Awesome job just the same!
Alma chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
beautiful. *sniff*
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
this is sad. it kind of reminds me of "My Immortal" by evanescence. this is cooler, though, seriously, it is.
Getuie chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Beautiful, sad, but simply an amazing poem... Going to favs
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
so sad.. it a bit confusing though.. like did this friend pass away, or like just lost the love? i dunno. it really a nice poem and what not though. yup yup. *TI*