|Reviews for The Demon Mistress|
| seilann chapter 3 . 4/13/2004
Always with the cliffhangers...
Yay! Update! I love your story!
Happy b-day! (even though it's long past... oh well!)
| LillySananger chapter 2 . 4/8/2004
come on finish it! i'm waiting
| seilann chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
Dude, are you gonna end ALL your chapters in suspense? Heheh... I like your main character. She's amnesiac and very dangerous... you rock.
I hate suspense. You are EVIL!
| LillySananger chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
work in progress. i think it will turn out well. but.. everytime someone is speaking start a new line. paragraphs would be nice. right now it is hard to read. keep writing!
| seilann chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
You have to hit the enter key twice if you want your paragraphs to show up. And things like bold and italics can only be seen if you save your story as an html.
Hm... maybe two or three possible outside influences here? *coughs* Yatta! Ganbatte kudasai!
I'm glad one of my friends finally got an account... I've been so alone in my cyberspace authorship! *tears*