Reviews for Whirl Around
hybrid calling chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
Beautiful poem! I love its pattern; I love how each stanza has the same structure, creating continuity without becoming repetitive. Your descriptions are good, too: I can see the dancer and the audience in my mind's eye.
Caitir chapter 1 . 3/15/2004
very nice. lovely, darling. i can almost see it.
Rigalphantisi911 chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
oh! this is really good.i like it! its so cool and the repitition of "whirl around" is really neat.
Getuie chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
This was beautiful.
I have a suggestion for the way the file has been formatted in FP. Just make a space between each stanza or maybe between the stanza and each characteristic of the dancer because you really have to concentrate to note what's going on and that's mostly because of the formatting and not anything else of this good poem