|Reviews for Puppet Show|
| Sylf chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
wow... This is great!
Your emotions really come through on this piece; they're very dark yet very beautiful. Wonderful, wonderful piece of work. I hope to read more of your work, soon...
| Melissa Lea Night chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
i think this is my favorite of the ones you've posted. great imagery, i can tell you like to work with powerful words that invoke the image which is great. you do this very well. and the way it flows is supurb. great job!
| Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I love love love the ending! The last two stanzas are definitely my favorite. _
I am glad I could finally make you join! Write more!
| Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I really like the message in the last stanza and the overall flow of this piece. It has a really nice rhythm. Fantastic job.