Reviews for Puppet Show
Sylf chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
wow... This is great!
Your emotions really come through on this piece; they're very dark yet very beautiful. Wonderful, wonderful piece of work. I hope to read more of your work, soon...
Melissa Lea Night chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
i think this is my favorite of the ones you've posted. great imagery, i can tell you like to work with powerful words that invoke the image which is great. you do this very well. and the way it flows is supurb. great job!
Namir Swiftpaw chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I love love love the ending! The last two stanzas are definitely my favorite. _
I am glad I could finally make you join! Write more!
~Namir Swiftpaw
Nails For Your Crucifix chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
I really like the message in the last stanza and the overall flow of this piece. It has a really nice rhythm. Fantastic job.