Reviews for Sin Nomine
Lilyoftheflames chapter 5 . 2/25/2004
O.o! Not what I expected at all! But it's still awesome...poor Scar! And what did Yugi do to the guards? Or was it the thing that was attacking her when the rain came? hhm...so many questions! hehe And THANK YOU SO MUCH for the wonderful reviews! :) makes me happy and gives me inspiration to write more! Well, I've bored you enough! Update REALLY SOON!I'll be waiting! -ko
mute-demon81 chapter 5 . 2/22/2004
I like Cole!
Lauren334 chapter 4 . 2/14/2004
This was good! I can't wait to keep learnig about both Yugi and Scarlett's backround...Also I'm really interested in reading more of doubled edged fate, so you should update that one! okay well great job!
Lilyoftheflames chapter 4 . 2/13/2004
O.o OH NNO! NOT YUGI! You'll bring her back wont you? HHM You HAVE to update this story soon! ehehe I'll be waiting -ko
Lauren334 chapter 3 . 2/10/2004
That was good! Yugi is so sweet! Update soon!
Lilyoftheflames chapter 3 . 2/10/2004
EW *for the demon dying thing* AAW:'( *for all the elves dying* AAW*for the sweet interaction between Scar and Yugi* and YAYY*for you for doing this chappie!* and PLEASEE*for you to do another one REALLY soon!* :) Well, LOVED this chappie I'll be waiting for your next one! -ko
Sidious Sam chapter 3 . 2/9/2004
Not too bad, but I still need to read more ;)
I am, however, finding that you jump around too much, you should give a better description of each character, andthe situation that they are in. I also think that you need to work on making the story flow more easily, it tends to jump from one parragraph to the next with little to tell you if you have missed something. Over all though, not a bad effort so far. Give me more :P
Sam
Sidious Sam chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
Not bad. I would say I liked it, but there isn't enough yet for me to make an opinion. Would like to read more.
Sam
Lauren334 chapter 2 . 2/6/2004
Oh poor Yugi...So sad whatever it was that happened to her. Scarlett as well. You have to update soon! It's a great story!
Lauren334 chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Wow really interesting! Wonderfully written and grabbed my attention from the start! I need to read more!
Granite Claws chapter 2 . 2/5/2004
Cheh? Auggh! Now I have TWO reasons to keep reading!
Granite Claws chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Eh? What demon? WHat'd it do? I must read on!
Lilyoftheflames chapter 2 . 2/4/2004
O.O OMG! OH NO YUGI! Whos doing that? I wanna know! (so i can go beat him up!) and scarletts cool...she reminds me of rukie..i think that was the character's name...hehe well...update soon! I wanna know whats going on? I'll be waiting-ko
kourtney1617 chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
O! GOOD GOOD!hehe I want you to write more soon! I'll be waiting -ko
DarkDepression chapter 1 . 2/1/2004
I love the beginning of your story! Keep writing!
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