|Reviews for Power of the Elements|
| lazywriter2009 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
I LOVE YOU! (wait, you're a guy right) sorry
i mean...your story is REALLY REALLY GD!
i cant really read well on com (eye strains) but i get your story and love it! man...if you ever publish i better be the 1st to know hahax...
nice job on this.
| Icebender21 chapter 6 . 4/12/2008
It's cool. I like it as it is now, even if I'm not even halfway through. I like the fight scenes, they're awesome.
| Kumquat21 chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Pretty good- sounds like a vidio game so far. I like all the elements you used- most people only think there is four, but really there are a lot more!
| Kitsu Kusanagi chapter 2 . 5/14/2005
lol. Wow. You're just prepared to see this animated. But here's a tip: Try writing it in a past tense. You've got something interesting here. I think I'll stick around.
| ArisArcaniumRose chapter 46 . 3/1/2005
hm, good. you typed to fast so there were a few misunderstadings while i was reading so i would give your story a 3 and a half stars out of should make a set of dark elemental titans, like instead of blaze you have inferno. ok, heres a list from top to bottem infernofire tempest (just keep it, no one will notice)wind frostice ivynature megetonforce sunamiwater thunderlightning destructerearthwell, there you have it, all the names of the should be evil titans. oh yeah, switch the genders around for these guys. plus, you should enabel the dark titans (and the normal titans)to fuse together (rock, fire, force and nature combine into the volcano titan, and lightning, wind, water and ice combine to make the storm titan)the dark titans combine in the same way but the turn into the sun titan and the moon titan. ok done.
| Alice Potato chapter 46 . 2/27/2005
Faiza-kun is alive! *glomps Faiza-kun* And Valcron is defeated~! *does happy dance* Wait . . . that just means there's going to be an even more powerful enemy next 'season', ne? Damn . . . And I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long! My Internet was down for a month, then FP wouldn't let me review. Grr. Start the next season, soon, onegai!~*Namarie*~
| Cheesy Poof Man chapter 2 . 2/14/2005
Yeah... I like the story, but its a little Power Rangers-ey. It sort of scares me in a sense. Try to tone the kid's show-ness down a notch next time. Good story anyways.
| Alice Potato chapter 42 . 1/27/2005
*wearing stolen I _ Funny, though, so I guess that makes up for it. Gah! A cliffhanger? *shakes fist* You are a terrible, terrible person. Update soon! ~*Namarië*~
| Alice Potato chapter 41 . 1/27/2005
Heh. Ryu sounds rather like me fighting “Über-Naraku” in the Inuyasha RPG . . . *sweatdrop* Anyway, speaking of Ryu-chan (why am I calling everyone -chan these days? *sweatdrop again*), when are he and Christina, er, ‘getting together’, for lack of a better phrase? I really like them as a couple! TT_TT Poor Selen-ja-chan . . . I really use the word -chan too much . . . Gah! The final battle starts next chapter! Must keep reading! ~*Namarië*~
| Alice Potato chapter 38 . 1/27/2005
GAH! I am such a bad reader/reviewer! I don’t read the good stories for a mere month and then everybody writes five chapters~! Then, FictionPress doesn’t let me review! *growls* Hee hee. _ Younger Faiza is kawaī! *looks around nervously* He’d kill me if he heard that, wouldn’t he? And, just wondering, would they really use Japanese words like ‘sensei’ on another world? Well, they wouldn’t actually be speaking English, either, so never mind . . . And, y’know, shouting remarks and stuff could be helpful in a fight. The could serve t’ distract one’s opponent or something. In karate, you use kiai for a similar purpose. *grimaces* Emo . . . ¡Guacala! Anyway, on t’ the next chapter! ~*Namarië*~
| Winged Victory chapter 2 . 1/17/2005
You might already know this...but, if your basing your Titians on the myth Titains...well...
there were 12 titians...6 girls and 6 boys...nice and even...each of them were so big that their mother Gaea, the earth, carved their highchairs out of mountians...
And their father was Uranus (Ournous) the sky...
yeah, and they were gods, so you might want to put in there that they can't lie and can't die...well maybe not the not deing part, but the not lying psrt is cool...
just for your info...
you might have gotton too far to add in that stuff, but it's good to know your myths
my name, is from Nike the greek goddess of victory, winged victory
you know like the company Nike, so the shoes, when you run you are winged and you are ceirten to have victory
well maybe that's what the founder wanted...
| Fallen Valkyrie chapter 39 . 1/1/2005
Sorry I haven't been around lately to review, but exams suck. I finally got some time to myself and up to date on my stories though! :)
I like this story a lot, I hope you don't abandon it half through your vision like a lot of people tend to do.
| Sept. Rose chapter 4 . 12/26/2004
Hmm... I coulda sworn I'd reviewed you before, but I didn't see it, so here's another. Thanks for reviewing my story, and I'll continue reading yours soon. C&C? Basically the same as some of the other reviewers (a few typos, some of the dialogue feels a little funny), but I'm sure that in the following chapters, that will greatly improve. Looking forward to how it turns out! -ASR
| demiXgod chapter 1 . 12/21/2004
teen titans meets naruto? many differences though, will read when i have the time. sounds good...i haven't started winter break yet, so i'll get back to you...
| Crimson G chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
I did some editing in my story. Character Files first. Then I drastically change episode 1, episode 2 I did a few changes. Then episode 3 where the final five get there powers. I split it and changed so now it's episode 3 and episode 4. So I made some editing and you should check it out.