Reviews for Empty Echoes
Kalopsia chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
weird. i dont know what i feel from this poem. but i like it. very much.
zenni chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
wow. I really like this poem, full of emmotion, yet distant at the same time. An interesting topic to choose. _
forgottenmoon831 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Awesome poem! Good rhyming and the title fits well! Oh, and thanks for the review, i really really appreciate it, thank you!
ROMAN EMPEROR chapter 1 . 4/8/2004
interesting...nice
Silverfire Starr chapter 1 . 4/1/2004
Wow, you have really great rhyming here. I especially like the first two lines "Fires burn but I don't feel it/steel bites but my pain steals it" It's strange how those two lines set off an echo in me, perhaps that's why the title's called so.
Great job, and keep writing!
s.s
S.J Will chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
nice JOB!
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
wow. just wow.
Kim
the insane floo pot chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Hm maybe that's we're not meant to see our lives from afar becasue if we took time out to watch ourseleves for have we really are... we couldn't cope with the disappiontments that we are! *grins* i just love how you write with such darkness and angst it's wonderful to read and don't worry it's not "the usual teenage rubbish coming out" lol... it's fanastic what you write _
pudina7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
I really enjoy the 2nd and 3rd lines of this piece...very vivid!