Reviews for Hidden Vipers
Pandakun84 chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Cool. I really like this. Good job. by the way, thanks for the review!
CowGirl1987x2006 chapter 1 . 8/9/2004
wow... i'm speachless... great job writin' that one...
CowGirl
ROMAN EMPEROR chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
this reminds me of myself so much. except for the 4th stanza. this s a new favorite
William Ironclad chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
Very Nicely written. Well put. I love it.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
the insane floo pot chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Hey there WOW great poem... I've never thought about it from the other person's perspective before... that someone would have remorse or be sorry for something they've done... and to feel so deeply about it to! It's so dark and powerful and simply fantastic to read... it's one of those poems that will make people stop and think things from both sides...
"I never stopped to think or care
Ruled by selfish desire"
*sniffle* the words just scream beautiful to me!
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
such a powerful poem, potent with a tinge of darkness...a constant bad luck. i liked the warped atmosphere, the feeling throught the piece thats something wasnt quite right. my fav line would have to be the last one, it was very intriguing and very beautiful as well as quite dark...
"Made heartbreak look like an art." very cool, i loved it.
great work here chica, keep it up. kudos!
- thanks muchly for the review :)
godawful teen-angst poetry chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Usually I don't like rhyming poetry...but this is nice. Good job. Apologies for my lack of usefulness in reviews .
lyv
Nev Jee chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
NICE! You achieved writing about a rather dark subject without your work becomming the all-too-common "dark poetry." Very emotional and effective.
One suggestion: You may want to try to write a poem like this without using words/phrases like "eventually", truth be told", etc. Poetry tends to create images of those words without having to actually use them (as you might have to in essay writing and stuf things.) And, since you are quite good at this, you won't have any trouble displaying emotion without using these "connection" words.
Nice job!
Aryante chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
oh, I love it! especially the last verse! love it!
Butterfly Radcliffe chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Beautiful job with kind of a hard subject. I love the title!
Faith, Hope and Love
Cherry Jones chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Hey Thanx for R&R some of my stuff
and this poem rocked I loved it
It was sad and meaningful at the same time
can't wait to read some of your work in books lol
Sweetipi