Reviews for The Last of my Pride
AnotherFace chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Nicely Written. I like the way you have the stanzas. like the way u have "all" written by itself.
far-away-dreamer chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
Incredibly sad and a great sense of loneliness.
The Piano chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
another excellent poem with good flow of words
Dracula Lord of the Vampires chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
Very good. Invokes a lot of emotion.
Endless Nightmares chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Wonderful!
Excellent!
Rad!
Outstanding!
ehh, you get the picture heh
Whispers In Silence
Solesse chapter 1 . 2/19/2004
It's so sad and lonely! It's wonderful and beautiful, and so full of emotion.
quirky writer chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Very moving; some excellent vocabulary, which makes me feel sorry for the Lion of the piece.
Keep Writing!
Q.W
Jade Daughter of Darkness chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Good work Fabian Cortez. I love your lastest work. It rememides me of the Lestat from "The Vampire Lestat" by Anne Rice. Don't ask me why. Anyway, keep it up!
ipitythebaka chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
OOh. Thought provoking. Indubitably. _ Gives me several possible scenarios to imagine... The intentional "choppiness" makes me think of an overwhelming rush of memories.
(Thanks for the review!)
Slurpee
Ravena Storm chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Its good, i like the short lines they add atmosphere and emotion to the work ) *re reads it* yeah it a brilliant piece of work, nicely done.