Reviews for Proposal
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
sometimes i glimpse impossible,

heart which is past inflexible,

once was thought inexorable,

now becomes excoriable,

all she wanted was treasure trove,

all that was of value time hove,

all that flew was peace's white dove,

all that was diminished was love.

p.s. I am intrigued by your "opposite of a haiku" comment and will have to wrack my little brain to come up with an answer. *lol* m
kikki07 chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
wow your rights short, but maybe you wanna put some detail into it
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Well, how old are you? Geez love is in the air I guess.
K a l e y a chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
Haha! This is funny! It's quite good though. Reverse Haiku...hmm
Mime chapter 1 . 2/2/2004
Cool, it's a reverse haiku. I've never tried writing one of those before (blamed on the fact that the syllables don't fit when I do try -_-' ). Keep writing!