You finally did it! You finally got this chapter up! Good for you Anna I'm so proud! lol. Oh but about the story. The first chapter was good but this one sort of fell short you've probaly just been too lazy to notice. It's just constructive criticism don't cry!

Hey it's April this story was good (it actully sucked but since you're my best friend I guess I have to like it!) so when are you gonna do chapter two? I was just playing about the comment I made. It was actually really good I can't wait for Ch. 2. Well I'll talk to you later.
Bye!