Great story I simply wish there was more.

Well, I think that anohter old traidition is going to come back: BRING BACK THE LAWYERS! With Tv back, lawsuits are going to fly!

Well, its good to see that Jack can make a mistake at one timne or another.

Nice.

Lots of Games within Games going on here. Sooner or later, they are going to blow up in someones face. And I do NOT want to be around when that happens!

wow wee Action is king in this chapter, well written, reads smothe as a well tuned car. I like your story.

Sounds like Jack's reputation is enough to make her an ally of the mayor, at least for the time being.

Time to show Heather a little love.

Sounds to me like Jack is playing the game correctly! Keep the opposition off balanced, and maybe have two sides destroy each other while at it.

Well, now we know that the Sisterhood does have some powerful allies. Powerful enough to make some people reconsider their attacks. Now, the big surprise was finding out that Motoko and Davidson were father and daughter! This was a curve that no one expected!

not bad, haven't read all of it yet but it's good

written many stories but not many are punlished yet

checkem out

Sounds like we have the beginnings of a war going on! Question is, who is going to win, and who is going to take the blame for starting it.

It is good to see another chapter up. keep up the good work.

I, for one, am glad that Jack has friends that care about her. In times like this, friends are about all you can count on.

Well, Jack found herself and her allies some sactuary. But they are not out of the woods yet!