|Reviews for Demons of Dreams|
| aalagidude chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
Kool stuff im already an insomniac thanks for reviewing review some more great stuff dark i like it see ya
| the heart's pawn-shop chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Very nice. i love your ideas. You must have suffered from a case of nightmare attack before writing this because it was perfect. it's horrible when you have one, you fall back asleep and have another...
anyway great job!
| Time To Change chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Recurring nightmares are the worst, sometimes towards the end of this one nightmare im always having i realise that im dreaming and that ive had this dream before but it doesnt stop me being terrified and i cant wake up. Anyways you dont want to know about my bad dreams. This was a kool poem
| nine iron chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Ok, no sleep for me tonight, I am scared, thanx alot! joking but still it is very good.
| BlakLace chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
swet like have ice cream with whip cream, and then you just grab the whip cream bottel and just suck the whole can dry.
:[ mwhahahaha ! -sucks- good job !
| embracethedark chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Wow. Very powerful, the images it brings to mind are vivid. I like it!
Thanks for the review!
| MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
So awesome, the discriptions are wonderful and paint such a vivid picture in ones mind. The ending is awesome, knowing you have to sleep and the deamons will once again return. Love this muches
| Othello934 chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
Very original and a fun read...flows together well, and theme is very nice. Great job!
| axica chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
powerful and very well done descriptives
sade would've been proud
you've really captured a troubling topic magnificently with original views on torment
i've always felt the trouble, but i've never managed to put it into words like these, and believe me, i know-i wouldn't be up at 12:10 in the morning on the day of a test if i didn't
| arctic-candy chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
good poem! great description...and i already have trouble sleeping so it's all good! :-D
| GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
o. I like I liek I like. VERY good. VERY VERY good. It's very different too. Demons. Dreams. Very good. Goin' in my favorites.
| angel-baby-tamil chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
this is so god i wish i could right like u anyways good luck
| Sammy- B chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
Oh...freaky. But I really like the ending. Oh, and your not alone, I cant remember the last time I had a good dream! Sad, but true.
| Machaira chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
Nice. It's very dark, but it describes the situation very vividly. I like this phrase: "Rivulets of red run down the contours of my back,"
Well done. :-)
| TumblingKitty chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Wow, omgosh, nice imagery, good rhythme, nice concept. It's almost as if your demons are inevitable, and to live for the day when you can forget them. A very dark poem, but quite cool. Keep it up!