Reviews for Demons of Dreams
aalagidude chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
Kool stuff im already an insomniac thanks for reviewing review some more great stuff dark i like it see ya
the heart's pawn-shop chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
Very nice. i love your ideas. You must have suffered from a case of nightmare attack before writing this because it was perfect. it's horrible when you have one, you fall back asleep and have another...
anyway great job!
Time To Change chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
Recurring nightmares are the worst, sometimes towards the end of this one nightmare im always having i realise that im dreaming and that ive had this dream before but it doesnt stop me being terrified and i cant wake up. Anyways you dont want to know about my bad dreams. This was a kool poem
nine iron chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Ok, no sleep for me tonight, I am scared, thanx alot! joking but still it is very good.
BlakLace chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
swet like have ice cream with whip cream, and then you just grab the whip cream bottel and just suck the whole can dry.
:[ mwhahahaha ! -sucks- good job !
embracethedark chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Wow. Very powerful, the images it brings to mind are vivid. I like it!
Thanks for the review!
MistrissD chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
So awesome, the discriptions are wonderful and paint such a vivid picture in ones mind. The ending is awesome, knowing you have to sleep and the deamons will once again return. Love this muches
Othello934 chapter 1 . 2/27/2004
Very original and a fun read...flows together well, and theme is very nice. Great job!
axica chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
powerful and very well done descriptives
sade would've been proud
you've really captured a troubling topic magnificently with original views on torment
i've always felt the trouble, but i've never managed to put it into words like these, and believe me, i know-i wouldn't be up at 12:10 in the morning on the day of a test if i didn't
arctic-candy chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
good poem! great description...and i already have trouble sleeping so it's all good! :-D
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
o. I like I liek I like. VERY good. VERY VERY good. It's very different too. Demons. Dreams. Very good. Goin' in my favorites.
angel-baby-tamil chapter 1 . 2/17/2004
this is so god i wish i could right like u anyways good luck
Sammy- B chapter 1 . 2/16/2004
Oh...freaky. But I really like the ending. Oh, and your not alone, I cant remember the last time I had a good dream! Sad, but true.
Machaira chapter 1 . 2/10/2004
Nice. It's very dark, but it describes the situation very vividly. I like this phrase: "Rivulets of red run down the contours of my back,"
Well done. :-)
TumblingKitty chapter 1 . 2/9/2004
Wow, omgosh, nice imagery, good rhythme, nice concept. It's almost as if your demons are inevitable, and to live for the day when you can forget them. A very dark poem, but quite cool. Keep it up!
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