Hey! Stupid me didn't know that if you have a fanfiction account, you also have a fictionpress account. And it took me all this time to figure it out. Amazing. Anyway, I re-read your fic during Accounting class and again, I love it. You're the best author in the whole wide world. :) And I LOVE boosting your ego. Hehehe..

What can I say, Rae? It's been a while since I've composed a review for a story. Yours is the first that I've read in the longest time. I must say though, it was a definite pleasure to read, which makes me wonder why the only comment you've received is a negative one. I, unlike the other reviewer, find the simplicity of the story very profound and meaningful, with hints of emotion and sarcasm dotted here and there to make the perfect combination needed in an original short fiction story. I don't know exactly how to put it, but all I can say is that the story seems..."human", if that makes any sense, lol. Anyway, I loved it. If I had a account, I'd definately bookmark it. :)

Your story is far too concentrated on perfection and it shows fore when I read this fiction (or whatever we call this on FPN) I feel blank; emotionless. There's really nothing to comment on rather than you should really put more emotion into your writing and soon, you have the english skills.
~Breathless