Reviews for Ready
Gladiany chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
:: Wondering what's going to happen next :: This was great for a "first time love scene"! :D I'm looking forward to reading some more of your story!
Bring
Us
More
Please
Davidia Kartina chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Oh my, that was good. You didn't go into using giant descriptive words, yet you used a good amount that let the reader understand everything.
Very nice and yes, damn them. Why is it that they do always seem right?
randomfanwriter chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
OW! that is so sad... Please don't tell me this is a one shot! it's would really break my heart! PLEASE CONTINUE! Come and read some of my stories also! _
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
Nicely writen, can't think of any comments save the one you don't want to hear. (that being that parents are write nine times out of ten)
leen02x chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
:'(
pretty sad