Reviews for Ready |
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Gladiany chapter 1 . 2/5/2004 :: Wondering what's going to happen next :: This was great for a "first time love scene"! :D I'm looking forward to reading some more of your story! Bring Us More Please |
Davidia Kartina chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 Oh my, that was good. You didn't go into using giant descriptive words, yet you used a good amount that let the reader understand everything. Very nice and yes, damn them. Why is it that they do always seem right? |
randomfanwriter chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 OW! that is so sad... Please don't tell me this is a one shot! it's would really break my heart! PLEASE CONTINUE! Come and read some of my stories also! _ |
Crelian2202 chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 Nicely writen, can't think of any comments save the one you don't want to hear. (that being that parents are write nine times out of ten) |
leen02x chapter 1 . 2/4/2004 :'( pretty sad |