Reviews for Fatal Attraction |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you no update in a year...*cries* |
![]() ![]() ![]() O, exciting, I love stories! Lol. I love Damion, he reminds me of a friend, though my friend is straight...maybe i should start looking more closely..hm. Anyways. Loving this story. Update soon, i wanna know why "terzy' is such a grump. ;o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() *pout* I want more. *puppy dog eyes* plwease! So cute! Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i know those days just to well, but usually my parents wake me up. Ender's Game is the bomb! i want to get speaker for the dead, its supposed to be a sequal for ender's game. im going to check out your bio, and see if i should add you as a favorite author, or if i should just add your story, we'll see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() was that Ender's Game they read? its gotta be it, right? right? well either way i just finished it yestereday! and i liked it even if it was sad. today we had to talk about it in class and i was the only persong who actually finished it, and i had to talk about it with two guys (and i kinda like one of them but im getting over the crush). and i read the prolough and it helped so much! everyone shoule read the proulge after they finish the book, and not in the start. well, im going to read more now. ja ne. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it i love it i want some more of it! update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awsome! I love how Damion's so happy and bouncy and absolutely adorable! It's so cute. You really make me laugh when Damion teases *Terzy*. My little pony...I loved the pink one. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw~! ::hops up and down:: I love guys like Damion. He's really open and high-spirited, when in fact he should be hating everything about Terzy the very moment he said fag to him. Just don't make him too playful or come off as too strong on Terzy, though - even a normal person would get annoyed in that sense. His perkiness sounds very becoming. Loving everything so far. - kijochan |
![]() ![]() hihihihi!_ whazup? i love damion!\*glomps damion and then gives him a teddy bear "don't you worry about that mean ol terzy, hon." skydance22 pulls out a long rope and cage form seemingly no where and grins evilly "i'll make him say he's sorry or else"!*/ i'm evil as only a 12 year old can be *cackles evilly* see? great fic. keep up the good work! later gator |
![]() ![]() ![]() VERY unrealistic. And a little cliche, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, I've had days like that. They suck. Staying home in bed is the right thing to do when your day starts like that. ~WM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya! Aww i think this is a cute little chapter, and as for grammar, i didnt really notice anything really bad (but then my grammar isnt great either!) Nice to see the other point of view, but my only whine is that it was short! PLEASE update soon! *big puppy eyes* David _ |
![]() ![]() Terzago is realistic but i dont think that damion was. He seemed much to childish and clueless. I mean he is gay but he's not like 9 yrs old right? And he doesnt seem to get that Terzago doesnt want n e thing to do with him...a bit unrealistic if you ask me but i might be wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wai! I've been checking this story everyday for an update! I'm so happy *bounces* tee hee. I still love Damion, I'm glad we get to know more about him. I'll be waiting patiently for the next update! Bai! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter again! I'm glad you are developing Damion's character more. He is so precious and I can't wait for more of this story! Update soon! queerrommance |