Hey LCOTS. How ya doin? Well, this is a really great poem. I was sorta wondering where you got yer name. Well, good news! I posted chapter 5 of Tess Dorgan today! Yippe!

First of all, I'm very glad that neither of us is a baka!
This poem is awesome!
I especially like the phrasing and the rhythm-particularly the last line of each stanza.
I was going to comment on which stanza I like the best, but I can't do it-I like them all too much!

Although I had previously read this poem, I think it is a literary and poetic masterpiece. I'm not entiely sure what a 'baka' is, but I'm guessing it is not a complimentary term to one's intelligence. Apperently I am a baka for not knowing what the 'little creature of the snow' was the 1st time I read this, but now that I know, the poem makes more sense.

Like the rest of your poetry, that was really good! Um, was it about a rabbit? or a hare...? *feels thick*