|Reviews for I'm Not|
| Delete Name chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
I've had this problem before.
Anyways, I love the little zigzaggy image you made with the words. . Kind of reminds me of a twisted cheeto, and I really enjoyed this poem.
| greenbanana chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
that was very cool... nothing else to say, used up all my compliments on your other poems, unless you want me to start repeating myself.
| Adriana DiVolpe chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Very nice. I like the layout, and the repetition drives the point home. If you're looking for advice, take it from a lesbian: just tell her that you're sorry, but you're not gay. Right after that explain that you respect the fact that she *is* gay, and that you're cool with that (I think you are, that's the conclusion I came to from the poem, anyway), but that's just not who you are. Oh yes, another important tip: if she's not out yet, DON'T spread it around that she flirted with you. This would cause much hell for her, obviously.
Good luck ;)
| Sagey chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
I like the format too. It really did work for this piece.
Everything has been said over and over and I don't want to bore.
It's a perspective not many think about but it's important and I'm glad the poem is being so well received.
| Guin chapter 1 . 2/7/2004
The layout works really well, nice to see someone using an imanginative format! Good poem.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
hm interesting.. i love the format and its sad... good luck if its a realy situation... i love it
| thosewhomustbecarried chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Very good poem. Courageous, too, to post it - very controversial. It's also great to see that the reviewers aren't angry, and do understand.
"She's articulate." I like that in a description. Keep it up! Cheers.
| Lina Inverse chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Although I am gay, I can understand this entirely. I understand that some people just aren't gay, no matter how accepting they are- after all, I'm just not straight no matter how much I accept heterosexuality. It's always hard to reject someone you care so deeply about because even though they mean the world to you, you just don't want anything physical with them.
| juliecranford-youlovemedontyou chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
I have a story called I'm not. "I'm not gay, I'm not bi, I'm in love, but I can't help myself." It might say "I'm not straight" in there too. I can't remember.
Sexuality is liquid.
| A-Moon-On-My-Wings chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Wow I love reading contravercial poems/stories! So you can imagine my delight when I read this. I'd say don't be afraid to write more contravercy in the future, but I don't think you'll have any trouble with that ;) very good. byebyez
| Kymmie chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
wow, thats a real awkard situation! I think you should just tell her bluntly that hey, your not gay. But the poem was nice though,I loved your formatt
| Dark Child chapter 1 . 2/4/2004
...wow *is speechless* This is wonderful. A true masterpiece.