Reviews for Why don't you call anymore?
The Postscript chapter 1 . 3/5/2007
A drizzle of bittersweetness in this. Every phrase in this piece is dependent on another in order to make this piece what it is. Pretty stable writing. Keep writing, k.
Sanie-Chez chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
Ok... it works.. lol... Did she actually say that? short but gets the point across.
-Ericka
Todd B. James chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
I agree with one of the other reviewers here. It would seem quite deliciously ironic that the one waiting to be called is doing the calling. The dry, ironic tone is furthered by giving "Beep" its own line. It makes the whole thing seem whimsical and fun, not to mention comically desperate.
Keep writing!
-T.J.
x0x-Still-Alive-x0x chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
Cute and sweet _
sheZadey chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
interesting- and realistic. ironic that the person is waiting to be called but calls anyway
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 5/18/2004
hum :( well shes silly then u can do better than her ;)
CandyLand36 chapter 1 . 5/14/2004
Short and sweet! A nice poem.
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 5/3/2004
short, but it gets the point across! great job! don't you just love it when people call to say "hi"?
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/29/2004
short, but nice. )
Tetris Queen chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
deep
Juliet Squared chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
Rather short, but to the point. It's quite moving.
MistrissD chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Its so short but yet right to the point and to me it seems like a message within leaving a message hehe . So kawaii .
TheresA-Pickle-InMyCookieJar chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
...hm...short yet interesting...i wonder if you really left a voice mail like this...just wondering...