Reviews for The Forgotten |
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![]() ![]() I wish you had continued with this story. I know that it has been seven years, but you can still keep writing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's got a very interesting idea; the whole illegitimate child thing. Keep it up! Also, I like your writing style. It's neat and doesn't have any uneccessary sentences. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh, the interaction between Nat and Amy is great, can't wait to see where that goes. And heh, Brightons face when he found out he had eight sisters! I hope you don't mind but I have a c2 for regency stories, and I'd love to add this one too it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the most amazing begining to a chapter ever! I love how all the girls are sort of developing different characters, and you handle the different story lines very skillfully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh, the plot is getting exciting! This is a really good story, I love this little gorgeous Regency-moments like the maid called Chastity and the cousin in Virginia. It really helps give a feel of the time it was set. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() He! I love Meredith Archer! he is such an awesome character, so obnoxious and tutting. heh. This is going well. i like Conrad as well, he is sweet and I can't wait to see what happens next. [Someone with an anachronistic knowledge of biology should perhaps inforrm Meredith that it is *his* fault he has no sons. it's the sperm that determin the sex of the child] D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, this is a good start. The characters are great and you set the scene well :) |
![]() ![]() very intersting story. i like it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... so David and Bess married? And then Rebecca and Will split? Aw... that's sad... :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really Really REALLY enjoying this story, plz update soon. I know i've alrady reviewed, but i'm anxious to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm...for some reason, this story seems like Anna and the Duke from the Avons true romance series. A few of the similarities are 1) Duke called for his son from England. 2) Heir to the whole fortune 3) Meets his siblings ( 8 sisters in your fic and 1 sister and 1 brother from the book) 4) Set in Regency England Well, I hope that your plot would be different than the book and would become more interesting |
![]() ![]() oh cool. Continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your historical stories. update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great. update soon |