| Reviews for The Forgotten |
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   decree of fate chapter 6 . 4/14/2004 oh..i really like this story :) it's very interesting and u write great update soon! |
| jojobear chapter 1 . 4/9/2004 Okay quick note, guys: I see that those of you who are reading "The Affluent and Destitute" are quickly seeing similarities. To quash anymore guesses, I will say that this story was going to be originally "Part II" of the A/D but then the story grew by itself so quickly that it was pretty much unrelated and could stand on its own as a story, only with some of the characters related. Will reading this story give away the ending of the A/D? Certainly not. The only thing that will be spoiled for you is who ended up marrying who, but you won't have a hint of how it happened, which, to me, is actually the best part of all. You know that old saying, "The fun of it all is getting there..." or something like that. And so, yes, Amy is David's daughter, a feminine version of him, so...basically, a Rebecca, but with a real personality as opposed to the submissive little maid. |
| elohimdancer319 chapter 4 . 4/9/2004 lovely story, i think it will turn out great. KB |
| passion101 chapter 6 . 4/7/2004 Hey! I'm from kentucky! and no, I am NOT a hick! Oy, I hate it when people think that...so stereotypical! Anyway, the names in this story are the same in another story I am reading, but I can't quite pin point which one it is... |
| Cassandra Flavius chapter 6 . 4/6/2004 *grins* Don't I recognize the name Phineas from somewhere else? Anyway...I was about to say that I smell romance between Brighton and Amy, but then Nat had to come along, and really he's like da bomb! But to say Jacqueline and Brighton is strange cuz they're siblings... it is all bhery confusing indeed, and have faith that it will clear up if i just keep oh reading and more chapter are updated! |
| Black-Rose7 chapter 6 . 4/5/2004 I am enjoying your story very much, particularly since, as far as I can tell, the historical knowledge upon which it is founded is flawless. I have but one complain: the Duke's amazing ability to change the colour of his eyes. It wouldn't matter were it not for the fact that emphasis is placed upon them to communicate how attractive he is. This is a superb story, and I eagerly anticipate a prompt update! |
| PhiloNysh chapter 6 . 4/5/2004 and the story deepens. It is going really well. Update soon |
| kelley1987 chapter 6 . 4/4/2004 Hey, this is a great chapter! I only have one small criticism though..lol. Honestly, I wanted to see more of the reunion between Brighton and his father. But it's still good. Keep up the great work! :) |
| thelonelyegret chapter 6 . 4/4/2004 I'm quite fond of Amy and Jaqueline; they like such nice, interesting young ladies. |
| Ailenat chapter 5 . 4/3/2004 WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! I see a romance between Jaqueline and Brighton (if there isnt then ignore that statement, lol) its great love it! write more now! its wonderful |
| Cassandra Flavius chapter 5 . 4/2/2004 have not I read this chapter before?...O_o... |
| kelley1987 chapter 5 . 4/2/2004 This is a great chapter. Update soon! :) |
| PhiloNysh chapter 5 . 4/2/2004 'Tis going very well... update soon! |
| kelley1987 chapter 4 . 3/30/2004 This is a great story! :-D. I can't wait til Brighton and the Duke meet face to face. It's gonna be so awesome...lol. Keep up the great writing! I'll definitely be checking back. :) |
| CraziCoconutz chapter 4 . 3/26/2004 I absolutely am raving about this story and please update soon! |