Reviews for Abuse
Disturbances within chapter 1 . 2/12/2004
nicely written the first stanza is especially powerful
AlyLS chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
This is good, it captures the feelings very well in just a few simple words. Well done! :-)
karmakaze chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Wow...that's really sad:(
I have one titled Abuse, but it's slightly different.
Great job:D
TiEka Koniku chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
hitting another person is so fricken stupid. i sorry if it really happens though, but yeah. how sad. *TI*
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
Thats cool, If you expand it would make a cool song.
A Perfect Circle chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
A short poem, but very very powerful. I don't think I've read a poem that powerful before. The flow is perfect and so is the rhyming. Nice piece.